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my perfect wife
发布时间:2018-06-26 08:02:41 作者:任晓飞  发布者:1398452212qqcom 浏览次数:573  类别:英文作文  
[大学二年级] 陕西省 >> 西安市 >> 临潼区 >> 斜口街道


My Perfect Husband: A Corresponding Essay to My Perfect Wife "My Perfect Wife" by Keith Lanman really impressed me much, because if it hadn't been for this article, I wouldn't have found one sharing such fussy spouse-choosing attitude with me like Mr. Lanman. I appreciated his ideas of perfect wife, but they were incomplete, as you couldn't choose a spouse only by some hard standards, other inner qualities also should be taken into account . Just like Keith, he takes the physical quality into a big account to his mate. She needs to be tall, halfway decent, beautiful and slim-figured. If a girl matains all of the requests, but she is lazy, never do any housework; she is vixenish, whenever you disagree with each other, she will be angry like a shrew. She is a beauty, so she likes all kinds of luxury and spends money like water. Do you still choose her? Keith Lanman said he was a very energetic person, so he wanted a wife who can be involved with life such as play a game of tennis or racquet ball and enjoy camping, boating, traveling and so on. As he expected, she is so red-blooded that she always makes lots of new friends in diverse social activities on and off every day, which leads to her less care for you and your family. In addition, you can't accuse her of her behaviour because energy is what you set as a standard when choosing a mate. If so, do you also hope her simply full of energy? On the education level, Keith Lanman's perfect wife must be a woman who knows what is going on in the world and also be independent and helpful about financial matters. What he described was a all-powerful image. Under his description she is so independent and powerful but also would be a tough person. From Keith Lanman's words, we can see you like to have the initiative and monitor the situation. Why do you want to choose a mate who has the same character with you? Besides, in front of you she performs formdiably, can you really stand it? Dosen't your self-esteem weighed down on? All in all, Keith Lanman' ideal wife must be a woman with brain as well as good looks. I don't think he is wrong,yet choosing a spouse is not choosing a people who resembles you but who can complement you. Perfect wife can not equate with such standards. Be realistic and try to find a spouse by following your heart.
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