交文友,学写作,就到作文批改网! | 收藏本站专版专栏 |RSS订阅     欢迎,朋友 | 免费注册会员登录
 
设为首页
收藏本站
会员中心
批改符号说明:

绿底为优美黄底为瑕疵红底为错字(括号里边为间批)中间横线为删除上标符号添加字文下隔行写点评,点评内容用红字,红双线‖”处段另起(分段).

 

Compare my country with American
发布时间:2012-11-15 19:30:24 作者:天啦啦  发布者:828035 浏览次数:2121  类别:英文作文  
[高中三年级] 湖南省 >> 张家界市 >> 永定区


   It's well-known that China has 5000 years history and has formed unique culture .The culture is involved in different area.In this article i will focus on  the custome on eating between China and American .

   As a saying goes "Bread is the stall of life".Chinese pay much attention to the eating and well know about eating .About eating ,we attach importance to "fresh".The more fresh the food is ,the more we enjoy it .For instans ,the material that we use to make food must be fresh .

   Chinese have a lot of ways and advanced techniques in cooking .We can cook kichen more than ten ways,from it ,we can know Chinese make food with deep heart.That's the reason why Chinese food is so popular in the world .However,in American ,it's less impossible for them to buy fresh food ,because they buy food from supermarket where stored for days .In my point of view ,American prefer to fast food ,such as chips ,KFC,burgers and milk .But i have to say American are extremely good at making desert and chocolate .

   In China ,people tend to put dishes into customers plate to show hospitality , American may think it do harm to health ,due to your chopsticks have been used by you .

   For the position of seat ,which seat belongs to you,which seat belongs to the older ,you must to know !You should give the older and the host a sit which towards east.It's showing your politeness and self-caltivation.  

教师点评:
  • 批改教师:冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
    批改时间:2012/11/21 20:41:31
    点评指数:
    点评内容:

       It's well-known that China has 5000 years history and has formed unique culture .The culture is involved in different area.In this article i(I) will focus on  the custome on eating between China and American .

       As a saying goes "Bread is the stall of life".Chinese pay much attention to the eating and well knowknown)about eating .About eating ,we attach importance to "fresh".The more fresh the food is ,the more we enjoy it .For instans ,the material that we use to make food must be fresh .

       Chinese have a lot of ways and advanced techniques in cooking .We can cook kichenchicken)more than ten ways,from it ,we can know Chinese make food with deep heart.That's the reason why Chinese food is so popular in the world .However,in American ,it's less impossible for them to buy fresh food ,because they buy food from supermarket where stored for days .In my point of view ,American prefer to fast food ,such as chips ,KFC,burgers and milk .But iI)have to say American are extremely good at making deserts and chocolates.

       In China ,people tend to put dishes into customers plate to show hospitality , American may think it do harm to health ,due to your chopsticks have been used by you .

       For the position of seat ,which seat belongs to you,which seat belongs to the older ,you must to know !You should give the older and the host a sit which towards east.It's showing your politeness and self-caltivation.  

  • 批改教师:王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
    批改时间:2012/11/25 15:45:29
    点评指数:
    点评内容:

       It's well-known that China has 5000 years history and has formed unique culture .The culture is involved in different area.In this article i (I)will focus on  the custome on eating between China and American .

       As a saying goes "Bread is the stall of life".Chinese pay much attention to the eating and well know about eating .About eating ,we attach importance to "fresh".The more fresh the food is ,the more we enjoy it .For instans ,the material that we use to make food must be fresh .

       Chinese have a lot of ways and advanced techniques in cooking .We can cook kichen(chicken) more than ten ways,from it ,we can know Chinese make food with deep heart.That's the reason why Chinese food is so popular in the world .However,in American ,it's less impossible for them to buy fresh food ,because they buy food from supermarket where stored for days .In my point of view ,American prefer to fast food ,such as chips ,KFC,burgers and milk .But i(I) have to say American are extremely good at making desert and chocolate .

       In China ,people tend to put dishes into customers plate to show hospitality , American may think it do harm to health ,due to your chopsticks have been used by you .

       For the position of seat ,which seat belongs to you,which seat belongs to the older ,you must to know !You should give the older and the host a sit which towards east.It's showing your politeness and self-caltivation.  

李之怡 共164篇 推荐7 优秀5
姜恩泽 共108篇 推荐22 优秀10
刘鼎轩 共98篇 推荐36 优秀24
马维霞 共80篇 推荐0 优秀1
陈永娟 共64篇 推荐15 优秀9
江秋 共63篇 推荐2 优秀2
陈乐乐 共60篇 推荐3 优秀0
胡豆儿 共59篇 推荐9 优秀7
房云玲 共57篇 推荐47 优秀5
董千里 共55篇 推荐30 优秀22
友情链接:百度   新华网   人民网   中国政府网   凤凰网   央视网  卫星地图  大师邦
关于本站 | 合作加盟 | 积分计划 | 联系我们 | 投稿须知 | 版权声明 | 问题解答
作文批改网 www.duzhenfang.com 地址:山东省临沂市罗庄区 电话:13864984078.
备案编号:鲁ICP备12014725号-1,设计制作:作文批改网
265.625毫秒