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Compare my country with American

发布时间：2012-11-15 19:30:24 作者：天啦啦  发布者：828035 浏览次数：2771  类别：英文作文  

   It's well-known that China has 5000 years history and has formed unique culture .The culture is involved in different area.In this article i will focus on  the custome on eating between China and American .

   As a saying goes "Bread is the stall of life".Chinese pay much attention to the eating and well know about eating .About eating ,we attach importance to "fresh".The more fresh the food is ,the more we enjoy it .For instans ,the material that we use to make food must be fresh .

   Chinese have a lot of ways and advanced techniques in cooking .We can cook kichen more than ten ways,from it ,we can know Chinese make food with deep heart.That's the reason why Chinese food is so popular in the world .However,in American ,it's less impossible for them to buy fresh food ,because they buy food from supermarket where stored for days .In my point of view ,American prefer to fast food ,such as chips ,KFC,burgers and milk .But i have to say American are extremely good at making desert and chocolate .

   In China ,people tend to put dishes into customers plate to show hospitality , American may think it do harm to health ,due to your chopsticks have been used by you .

   For the position of seat ,which seat belongs to you,which seat belongs to the older ,you must to know ！You should give the older and the host a sit which towards east.It's showing your politeness and self-caltivation.  

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/11/21 20:41:31
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     It's well-known that China has 5000 years history and has formed unique culture .The culture is involved in different area.In this article i（I） will focus on  the custome on eating between China and American .

     As a saying goes "Bread is the stall of life".Chinese pay much attention to the eating and well know （known）about eating .About eating ,we attach importance to "fresh".The more fresh the food is ,the more we enjoy it .For instans ,the material that we use to make food must be fresh .

     Chinese have a lot of ways and advanced techniques in cooking .We can cook kichen （chicken）more than ten ways,from it ,we can know Chinese make food with deep heart.That's the reason why Chinese food is so popular in the world .However,in American ,it's less impossible for them to buy fresh food ,because they buy food from supermarket where stored for days .In my point of view ,American prefer to fast food ,such as chips ,KFC,burgers and milk .But i （I）have to say American are extremely good at making deserts and chocolates.

     In China ,people tend to put dishes into customers plate to show hospitality , American may think it do harm to health ,due to your chopsticks have been used by you .

     For the position of seat ,which seat belongs to you,which seat belongs to the older ,you must to know ！You should give the older and the host a sit which towards east.It's showing your politeness and self-caltivation.  

• 批改教师：王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
  批改时间：2012/11/25 15:45:29
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     It's well-known that China has 5000 years history and has formed unique culture .The culture is involved in different area.In this article i (I)will focus on  the custome on eating between China and American .

     As a saying goes "Bread is the stall of life".Chinese pay much attention to the eating and well know about eating .About eating ,we attach importance to "fresh".The more fresh the food is ,the more we enjoy it .For instans ,the material that we use to make food must be fresh .

     Chinese have a lot of ways and advanced techniques in cooking .We can cook kichen(chicken) more than ten ways,from it ,we can know Chinese make food with deep heart.That's the reason why Chinese food is so popular in the world .However,in American ,it's less impossible for them to buy fresh food ,because they buy food from supermarket where stored for days .In my point of view ,American prefer to fast food ,such as chips ,KFC,burgers and milk .But i(I) have to say American are extremely good at making desert and chocolate .

     In China ,people tend to put dishes into customers plate to show hospitality , American may think it do harm to health ,due to your chopsticks have been used by you .

     For the position of seat ,which seat belongs to you,which seat belongs to the older ,you must to know ！You should give the older and the host a sit which towards east.It's showing your politeness and self-caltivation.