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Increasing Confidence
发布时间:2016-03-14 22:22:09 作者:兰亭集序  发布者:583699aylt 浏览次数:1612  类别:英文作文  
[大学一年级]


       

                   Increasing  Confidence

        Last weeek, I read a beautiful and incentive article. The article talks about confidence. From this article, I learn a lot. I know confidence is very important for us. 

        The world is  changing rapidly and most people are very anxious about it. In fact,I think it might even be stronger and more accurate to say that most people are downright fearful of what they see going on around them. This article let me know that keep confident is necessary for us to get success.Some of us fear failure, they think that they have no advandges and chances. So they do not try their best . However, If they are more confident ,they may reach their goals .As an old saying goes, Practise makes perfect. Taking me for example,I once was a shy girl ,and I lack confidence ,I am not good at singing ,I am afraid of speaking . So I got autism. My mother helped me to go out from it. She  told me that confidence is the key to success. My mother couraged me to try it . With  the help of my mother ,I tried my best to speak and sing . I am very happy that I improve my cofidence . Personal confidence is a skill that we can all develope . In some ways , it is undoubtely the most important skill  we can develope .

         Whatever chanllenges is currently in your life, know that it is there to help you grow and expand. Use the problems  you encounter to help you build your personal confidence . Remember ,you would not have the problem 

if you did not have the power to overcome it . Expanding your personal confidence will allow you to take on whatever you need to in order  to fuifill your  personal  mission .

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