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the fee fish

发布时间：2016-03-01 22:48:12 作者：王晨  发布者：280703026 浏览次数：1979  类别：中文作文  

The Free Fish

Back from school this afternoon, I put away my bag and went close to the large round fishbowl in the living-room. The fish were swimming from side to side freely in the tank. How I envy them! I picked up some fish food and began to feed them.

I bought the fish on my way home the other day and my dad bought me the large fishbowl so that I can enjoy and feed them when I’m free. “How happy you are,” I said to the fish as well as to myself, “while I have so much homework to do everyday.”

“No, life is never easy for us.” A voice suddenly came into my ear.

“Who’s talking?” I looked around as my parents hadn’t come back yet.

“It’s me! I’m in the bowl.” Then I saw some bubbles rising from the water in the fish bowl. I was shocked. The fish were talking! I was amazed and asked, “What’s your trouble?” “Well, there’s a long story.” The fish said. “I used to live in a large pool. And I can well remember that there was a time when my dear friends and I were kept spellbound by the water plants and other species in the pool. But everything has changed since we were caught and brought here.”

“But you are not happy here?” I asked.

“No. Kept in such a limited place with no enough friends, no enough sunshine and no fresh water, how could we? Besides, living in the bowl almost killed us as there’s not enough oxygen for us to breathe.” The fish sighed with some bubbles rising to the surface of the water.

“I’m sorry,” I said, “I didn’t know you were suffering so much. But what can I do for you then?”

“Just leave us as we are in the pool. That’d be enough.”

 

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