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My college life
发布时间:2012-11-04 16:18:19 作者:周芳  发布者:1221001208 浏览次数:2163  类别:英文作文  
[高中三年级] 重庆市 >> 南岸区


   Once going to college was a dream for me.Before entering college,i was full of expectation and desired.However,after being a real cllege student,i am not so satisfacted.

   I don't know why i was so negetive when faced difficulty?Maybe i haven't mastered a fit  way to welcomed my college life,to the exten that i always feel unhappy.Now,i am more lonely than my high school life.Because of meeting more competiters and have a wider view of the word,i feel pressure is more terrified.

   I often lost heart,but i will change myselfe.I know,only if i put my mind to my major,can i have a bright future.What's more ,i also need to develop my oher abilities,such as singing dancing chating comunicating and so on.

   In any case,i will treat my college life sincerely.I hope,after years,when i look back my life,i can have a clear conscience.

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