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发布时间:2015-11-30 16:22:26 作者:誰若晴天  发布者:shui 浏览次数:3369  类别:英文作文  
[大学二年级] 福建省 >> 厦门市 >> 思明区 >> 梧村街道


 

Writing

Directions: For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled. On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. Your should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象

2.出现这一现象的原因

3.我对这一现象的看法和建议

On Excessive Packaging

     With the development of economy and society, People are more and more focusing on commedies’ packing . So many companies or retailer decorate the good beautiful in order to meet consumers’ need. Therefore presently , there are numerous comedies have a phenomenon of excessive packaging .

There are some factors contributing to this phenomenon . To begin with ,quite a few people have a notion that goods have a nice packaging and good quality. What’s more, companies and retailers consist that more beautiful packaging can attract the potential consumer to buy them . Last but no least , there is a common phenomenon that people think it is very pround that giving a extremely beautiful gift to others.

As far as , I am concern , we are should aware of the excessive packaging can lead to waste resource and pollute the environment. Then ,we will reject the excessive packaging from ourself. On in this way can we turn over the excessive packaging .

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    Writing

    Directions: For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled. On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. Your should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

    1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象

    2.出现这一现象的原因

    3.我对这一现象的看法和建议

    On Excessive Packaging

         With the development of economy and society, People are more and more focusing on commedies’ packing . So many companies or retailer decorate the good beautiful in order to meet consumers’ need. Therefore presently , there are numerous comedies have a phenomenon of excessive packaging .

    There are some factors contributing to this phenomenon . To begin with ,quite a few people have a notion that goods have a nice packaging and good quality. What’s more, companies and retailers consist that more beautiful packaging can attract the potential consumer to buy them . Last but no least , there is a common phenomenon that people think it is very pround that giving a extremely beautiful gift to others.

    As far as , I am concern , we are should aware of the excessive packaging can lead to waste resource and pollute the environment. Then ,we will reject the excessive packaging from ourself. On in this way can we turn over the excessive packaging .

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