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Kitty Home
发布时间:2015-11-11 21:41:47 作者:若拙  发布者:ruozhuo 浏览次数:2424  类别:英文作文  
[非在校学生] 江苏省 >> 连云港市 >> 新浦区 >> 新东街道


In August, I went to Fuyang for my friend entered for a singing competition called Bill of Happiness by CCTV. After the competition we went to Kitty Home which is not far away from Fuyang .

Once I knew online that the first Kitty Home in china would open in zhejiang, then I intended to visit for loving children world. There was a singing competition happening at Fuyang of Zhejiang. To help her realize her dream ,I signed upfor the singing competition for her. She also planned to take her baby ,age 4,to have fun there .it was a good chance.

Kitty Home is in AnJie in HangZhou.AnJie is located in the northwest of ZheJiang .Its north is near TianMu mountain, facing HuZhou,Ningbo and HangZhou.it is a provincial tourism destination .For the geographical advantages Kitty Home was built there.

I took the train first and bus there with my friend, her assistant and her baby.

There is a special line to Kitty Home. We enjoyed the view along the road that leads to Kitty Home. The road is very wide. There are many Kitty Home ‘s advertisements on the balusters on both two sides of the road with green trees.

When we got closer to Kitty Home , many more building ran into sights. Above all the sightseeing lift with water screen was more amazing.

Kitty Home is a large pink park .lots of kitty’s cartons stood everywhere which was a happy place for children .Obviously it was fit more girls who are about age of 10.

 we were happy like little girls as if we had returned to our childhood .the princess drean was re-lit in everyone’s deep heart. Wearing hats and clothes in the room, we took group photos with kitty. The mood would be better at once. We together sat in the kinds of cars and boats and watched a 3Dmovie and played 3Dgames.of course the food was very rich too.

 my friend’s baby looked pretty lovely at play. When her mother was riding the bicyle around ,the baby was crying out naughtily in my arms. bought her a marshmallow which looked like a big cake. She burst into laughter while sharing it with other kids whom she didn’t know.

What a fun trip it was !

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