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Apology
发布时间:2015-10-29 13:27:18 作者:袁露菲  发布者:JeanNo3 浏览次数:2326  类别:英文作文  
[大学五年级] 辽宁省 >> 沈阳市 >> 新城子区 >> 虎石台街


You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to

1) make an apology

2) suggest a solution

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address.

You should write about 100 words.


Dear Bob,
I'm writing the letter to make my sincere apology to you.
To begin with, I would like to express my gratitude for the assistance you render me in Canada, which assured me a smooth and happy life. What's more, the CD of Beethoven's symphonies that you lent to me was found in my luggage when I arrived in China. I feel terribly sorry for my carelessness.
To solve the problem, I am intended to send the CD to you by Express Mail Service. Again, I apologise for all the inconvenience I've caused. Hoping that my solution will meet your wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

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