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On the importance of respect
发布时间:2015-05-11 21:41:55 作者:刘婧  发布者:静静做学霸 浏览次数:2562  类别:英文作文  
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On the importance of respect

If someone asks me ”who is  the most beautiful in  the world ? ” I will answer”it is not  Beyonce, a  famous superstar ,SongHuiQiao, a Korean star, but those people who show their respect for others. So learning  to be respectful is clearly the most important for life.   No one can be loved for his supercilious, which  becomes very clear as one has more experience in the world. Everyone ,in the world ,is  more likely to be respected by others and they do everything they can to get respect. Now let me explain

 In the first place everyone bears in mind  that being respectful is the base of the Chinese traditional values, and even the famous thinker, Tsun Tzu, in his famous work ,makes it clear that the person who respect others will be respected by others .Since this is our traditional values ,the only thing that we can do is to be respectful ,and to be a refined person.

  Secondly ,in our life ,everyone knows that being respected to others is being respected to ourselves. This can only be done by yourself by forgiving others’ small mistakes or giving best wishes to your competitors. Because no one wants to be shouted loudly or abused cruelly . Also ,we must care about others   ,such as our friends ,parents ,teachers, or even competitors . Because in the society ,you cannot lively happily  without their courage ,love ,confidence and respect to us.

Thirdly , for the nature, we are supposed to show our respect for it. We should respect for the  sun ,the moon, water ,river ,sea and so on ,because they not only give room  for survival ,but also give water for drink  and whatever they have to us   and  also they refresh the beautiful world ,our home ,making it more colorful .

Therefore, the respect in this world is to be accepted ,appreciated, and good, just as simple as a smile. It is a natural thing in our world. So let us show our respect for others and give them a big smile ,a warm  hello ,or just with a kind eye contact. Only in this way can  get respect from others and live a happy life. So don’t hesitate ,show our respect for others and get your respect!
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    On the importance of respect

    If someone asks me "who is the most beautiful person in the world ? " I will answer "it is not Beyonce, a famous superstar ,Song HuiQiao, a Korean star, but those people who show their respect for others. So learning to be respectful is clearly the most important for life. No one can be loved for his supercilious, which becomes very clear as one has more experience in the world. Everyone ,in the world ,is more likely to be respected by others and they do everything they can to get respect. Now let me explain the reasons.

    In the first place everyone bears in mind that being respectful is the base of the Chinese traditional values, and even the famous thinker, Tsun Tzu, in his famous work ,makes it clear that the person who respect others will be respected by others .Since this is our traditional values ,the only thing that we can do is to be respectful ,and to be a refined person.

    Secondly ,in our life ,everyone knows that being respected to others is being respected to ourselves. This can only be done by yourself by forgiving others’ small mistakes or giving best wishes to your competitors. Because no one wants to be shouted loudly or abused cruelly . Also ,we must care about others ,such as our friends ,parents ,teachers, or even competitors . Because in the society ,you cannot lively happily without their courage ,love ,confidence and respect to us.

    Thirdly , for the nature, we are supposed to show our respect for it. We should respect for the sun ,the moon, water ,river ,sea and so on ,because they not only give room for survival ,but also give water for drink and whatever they have to us and also they refresh the beautiful world ,our home ,making it more colorful .

       Therefore, the respect in this world is to be accepted ,appreciated, and good, just as simple as a smile. It is a natural thing in our world. So let us show our respect for others and give them a big smile ,a warm hello ,or just with a kind eye-contact. Only in this way can we get respect from others and live a happy life. So don’t hesitate ,show our respect for others and get your respect!
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