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发布时间:2015-05-07 20:30:01 作者:何天  发布者:zmsbhp 浏览次数:2831  类别:中文作文  
[大学一年级] 四川省 >> 乐山市 >> 犍为县


There is a proverb never too old to learn , so learn is important to a live of people . Reading can change life of people and Increase knowledge. With the city developed , people reading of time is reduce and people use much time on the Internet . Some people ara crazy of Internet and forget to reading .

As a college student , my point of view is what reading is important to people . reading can widwn the vision of people and can Increase more knowledge . reading is a good habit and make you a lifelong benefit. So they should like reading evey day and stick to reading everyday. Reading make life more beautiful

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    There is a proverb said that there is never too old to learn , so learning is important to a live of people . Reading can change life of people and Increase knowledge. With the city developed , people reading of time is reduce and people use much time on the Internet. Some people ara crazy of Internet and forget to reading .

       As a college student , my point of view is what reading is important to people. reading can widwn the vision of people and can Increase more knowledge. reading is a good habit and makes you a life long benefit. So they should like reading evey day and stick to reading everyday. Reading makes life more beautiful

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