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作为主修西医的学生,请谈谈对中医的看法,或是对于中西医争论的看法。
发布时间:2015-04-28 23:33:28 作者:吴悠  发布者:20110718 浏览次数:2123  类别:英文作文  
[大学一年级] 福建省 >> 福州市 >> 闽侯县 >> 上街镇


With the development of science and technology, Western medicine gradually dominate the medical market of our country, which was a unprecedented disaster for the traditional Chinese medicine.

As a student of western medicine, I am very bullish on the traditional Chinese medicine. The doctor of traditional Chinese medicine in the treatment of certain diseases has greater advantages than the western medicine which is convenient and has small side effect, such as acupuncture and moxibustion treatment of facial paralysis, etc. And the concept of prevention of traditional Chinese medicine is of great help to promote health.

After one thousand years of people’s count, the traditional Chinese medicine has gradually become a unique and has perfect theoretical system of life science. It pays attention to the harmony of man and nature. Besides, it pays attention to the overall coordination and balance of human’s each body system.

When it comes to the debate of traditional Chinese medicine and western medicine, I think the Chinese and western medicine are two health care system which should be complement but cannot replace each other.

In a word, every coin has two side. We should treat this two treatment to make us more and more healthy and live happily forever.
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