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what electives to choose

发布时间：2015-03-31 11:17:06 作者：Rachel  发布者：141214 浏览次数：4763  类别：英文作文  

    With the development of society,Demand is higher and higher to the students' comprehensive quality.

    The trend of The Times,the university opened a variety of elective courses.such as Music appreciation course,Art appreciation course, literature appreciation course and so on.Students for a variety of reasons chose a variety of elective courses.So many elective courses, there is always a suitable for themselves

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  With the development of society,Demand is higher and higher to the students' comprehensive quality.

  The trend of The Times,the university opened a variety of elective courses.such as Music appreciation course,Art appreciation course, literature appreciation course and so on.Students for a variety of reasons chose a variety of elective courses.So many elective courses, there is always a suitable for themselves
  

  As far as I'm concerned，I will choose some related to my professional elective course to enrich themselves.These electives can meet the demand of my interests and employment.Only in this way,I can treat later life better