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Chinese Folk Culture

发布时间：2015-03-26 18:40:21 作者：刘美含  发布者：我要过司机 浏览次数：3350  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

        Many different kinds of folk literature, it includes myths, stories, legends, songs, proverbs, etc. They are of the past formed a great influence on people‘s moral thoug.

        The hand that mends: ancient times, four pillar of giant big dump, destroyed the earth crack. In this case, nuwa smelting colored stone to repair heaven, the sky is repair, restored calm in the central plains of China.

        In ancient times there were ten SUNS in the sky, people unbearable heat. Hou yi to the emperor to the arrow, shot out nine sun, now left a sun, make temperature is appropriate people to live in.

        Folk performing arts, including folk drama, folk arts, music, dance, martial arts, acrobatics, etc.

        Chinese folk song and dance drama originated in the original work, is one of the world's three major drama origin.

        Including porcelain, jade carving, clay sculpture, pictures, paper cutting and other types, they are also a very precious legacy.

        For paper cutting, learning at present is mainly rural women, young people do not attach importance to its heritage.

        Folk culture reflects the common people, and, whether the various customs, such as the temple fair and the Spring Festival.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2015/3/27 7:39:03
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  Many different kinds of folk literature, it includes myths, stories, legends, songs, proverbs, etc. They are of the past formed a great influence on people‘s moral thoug.

  The hand that mends: ancient times, four pillar of giant big dump, destroyed the earth crack. In this case, nuwa smelting colored stone to repair heaven.the sky is repair, restored calm in the central plains of China.

  In ancient times there were ten SUNS in the sky, people unbearable heat. Hou yi to the emperor to the arrow, shot out nine sun, now left a sun, make temperature is appropriate people to live in.

  Folk performing arts, including folk drama, folk arts, music, dance, martial arts, acrobatics, etc.

  Chinese folk song and dance drama originated in the original work, is one of the world's three major drama origin.

  Including porcelain, jade carving, clay sculpture, pictures, paper cutting and other types, they are also a very precious legacy.

  For paper cutting, learning at present is mainly rural women, young people do not attach importance to its heritage.

  Folk culture reflects the common people, and, whether the various customs, such as the temple fair and the Spring Festival.

  You must follow the English routine and grammar structure. And this topic is too big for you to write in this short passage.

• 批改教师：胡进献 ( 上海市 >> 青浦区 >> 华新镇 )
  批改时间：2015/3/29 21:27:11
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          Many different kinds of folk literature, it includes myths, stories, legends, songs, proverbs, etc. They are of the past formed a great influence on people‘s moral thoug.

          The hand that mends: ancient times, four pillar of giant big dump, destroyed the earth crack. In this case, nuwa smelting colored stone to repair heaven, the sky is repair, restored calm in the central plains of China.

          In ancient times there were ten SUNS in the sky, people unbearable heat. Hou yi to the emperor to the arrow, shot out nine sun, now left a sun, make temperature is appropriate people to live in.

          Folk performing arts, including folk drama, folk arts, music, dance, martial arts, acrobatics, etc.

          Chinese folk song and dance drama originated in the original work, is one of the world's three major drama origin.

          Including porcelain, jade carving, clay sculpture, pictures, paper cutting and other types, they are also a very precious legacy.

          For paper cutting, learning at present is mainly rural women, young people do not attach importance to its heritage.

          Folk culture reflects the common people, and, whether the various customs, such as the temple fair and the Spring Festival.