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My English teacher
发布时间:2012-10-15 15:33:00 作者:王舒文 发布者:wangshuwen 浏览次数:3467 类别:英文作文 优秀指数:★★
[小学五年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇木作小学
I have a new English teacher.She's Miss Wang. She's young and pretty.She's a university student.She's active and strict ,but she's very kind .Her class is so much fun.I like my English teacher.
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批改教师:王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
批改时间:2012/10/15 19:04:23
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I have a new English teacher.She's Miss Wang. She's young and pretty.She's a university student.She's active and strict ,but she's very kind .Her class is so much fun.I like my English teacher.
Great, you did very well!
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批改教师:王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
批改时间:2012/10/15 19:14:31
点评指数:★★
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I have a new English teacher.She's Miss Wang. She's young and pretty.She's a university student.She's active and strict ,but she's very kind .Her class is so much fun.I like my English teacher.
点评:You are great! I love you,too!
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批改教师:李晨超 ( )
批改时间:2012/12/4 22:18:16
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I have a new English teacher.She's Miss Wang. She's young and pretty.She's a university student.She's active and strict ,but she's very kind .Her class is (has)so much fun.I like my English teacher.