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good habits result from resisting temptation

发布时间：2014-12-17 13:48:31 作者：魏旭  发布者：13308344642 浏览次数：7520  类别：英文作文  

Nowadays, the world is filled with all kinds of temptation: fascinating computer games that appeal especially to the young people, round-the-clock TV shows, luxurious designer clothes, etc. These kinds of entertainment and goods have enormously facilitated and enriched our lives, yet they also pose overwhelming distractions for us to develop good habits as"good habits result from resisting temptation."                                                                                              To form good habits, one needs a strong will and perseverance to resist temptation. The process of forming a good habit is also the course of overcoming temptation. The examples are as follows .The good habit of reading requires removing one's strained eyes from the websites and focusing on one's book constantly. Only when one succeeds in resisting temptation can he gain a good habit.                                                                                                            As Oscar Wilde once mocked, "I can resist everything except temptation." It is never easy to resist temptation so as to form good habits. however, good habits, once formed, will pay off in a lifetime.                

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  Nowadays, the world is filled with all kinds of temptation: fascinating computer games that appeal especially to the young people, round-the-clock TV shows, luxurious designer clothes, etc. These kinds of entertainment and goods have enormously facilitated and enriched our lives, yet they also pose overwhelming distractions for us to develop good habits as"good habits result from resisting temptation." 

    To form good habits, one needs a strong will and perseverance to resist temptation. The process of forming a good habit is also the course of overcoming temptation. The examples are as follows .The good habit of reading requires removing one's strained eyes from the websites and focusing on one's book constantly. Only when one succeeds in resisting temptation can he gain a good habit. 

    As Oscar Wilde once mocked, "I can resist everything except temptation." It is never easy to resist temptation so as to form good habits. however, good habits, once formed, will pay off in a lifetime.