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How to make a white lie

发布时间：2014-11-30 20:01:28 作者：磊  发布者：youlei 浏览次数：3335  类别：英文作文  

One day, I was strolling on the high street. Suddenly, something caught my eyes. A couple was hugging and kissing in public, ignoring the rest of the world. As a pity single girl, I admired them and wanted to feel their happiness so I pretended walking pass them but with my eyes fixed on them. When I walked closer to them, I found the handsome boy was my bosom female friend’s boyfriend, but the girl was not her. At that moment, I bristled with anger. I ran to them and exhausted all my effort to push the boy. At the sight of me, he was frozen then begged me not to tell my friend and promised not to do such thing again. I know my friend was deeply in love with him. So when she expressed her doubts about her boyfriend, I lied in sake of her happiness which she had been longing for and told her to trust him. After several such lying experiences, my lying skill was practiced. Today I will give you a benefit – teach you how to make a white lie for free, in case you fall into the situation where you have to lie.

To make a white lie well, you must have some psychological preparations. Firstly, remove your moral guilt. From our childhood, we are instilled with such concept that good child should not lie and child who lies is not a good child. So when we lied or were going to lie, we will feel guilty, uneasy and anxious. Those affections will definitely make you show your slip and prevent you from a good liar. So you need to tell yourself constantly that you are a good man and what you do is not to hurt anyone but to protect somebody until you not feel guilty any more. Secondly, self-hypnosis. In order to act naturally, you need to brainwash yourself. That means you should forget the fact and remove that part memory from your mind then make up what you are gong to say in your mind. After that, you need to reinforce the false memory by constant suggesting. According to a survey, people is such kind of interesting animal that once a thing shows up in their mind for more than 20 times, they will believe that is the truth. So, don’t worry, after 20 times of psychological suggestions, you will not feel any guilt at all because you have considered what you make up as the truth in your mind at that time.

Completing these preparations in psychology means a half success. Then the next and last step to take is to conduct the lie. When making a lie, you will meet a strong opponent who will give you away. That is not anything else but your own eyes. Anyone who is lying will stare at the upper right unconsciously. So in order to let the audience believe in you and not observe any tact, you have to stare at your upper left whenever you talk. In addition, to further convince them, you need a magic weapon—eye contact. Looking at your receivers’ eyes will give them an impression that you are sincere, honest and reliable, and then it will help you break their psychological obstacles and capture their trust quickly. Then it will be impossible for them to be immune to your influence on their mind and they will believe whatever you say.

Is the desire to lie burning in your heart now? If it is true, congratulations to you, you have the potential to be a good liar. But I, your teacher, have the duty to remind you that only when the lie can bring benefits to others, can you conduct. Once you lie for hurting others, you will fell into an abyss which is beyond redemption.

Now, the whole course to make a white lie is drawing to a close. Let me emphasis the points again. Firstly, remove your moral guilt, then apply self-hypnosis, last but not least, stare at the upper left and use eye contact when talking. Keep these in mind when you have to lie and you won’t indefinitely be a good liar.   

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  One day, I was strolling on the high street. Suddenly, something caught my eyes. A couple was hugging and kissing in public, ignoring the rest of the world. As a pity single girl, I admired them and wanted to feel (aviod) their happiness so I pretended walking pass them but with my eyes ^still fixed on them. When I walked closer to them, I found the handsome boy was my bosom female friend’s boyfriend, but the girl was not her. At that moment, I bristled with anger. I ran (came) to them and exhausted (used) all my effort to push the boy ^away. At the sight of me, he was frozen (shocked) then begged me not to tell my friend and promised not to do such thing again. I know (knew) my friend was deeply in love with him. So when she expressed her doubts about her boyfriend, I lied in sake of (in order to obtain) her happiness which she had been longing for and told her to trust him. After several such lying experiences, my lying skill was practiced. Today I will give you a benefit – teach you how to make a white lie for free, in case you fall into the situation where you have to lie. (Do you think that is a white lie?)

  To make a white lie well, you must have some psychological preparations. Firstly, remove your moral guilt. From our childhood, we are instilled with such concept that good child should not lie and child who lies is not a good child. So when we lied or were going to lie, we will feel guilty, uneasy and anxious. Those affections will definitely make you show your slip and prevent you from a good liar. So you need to tell yourself constantly that you are a good man and what you do is not to hurt anyone but to protect somebody until you not feel guilty any more. Secondly, self-hypnosis. In order to act naturally, you need to brainwash yourself. That means you should forget the fact and remove that part memory from your mind then make up what you are gong to say in your mind. After that, you need to reinforce the false memory by constant suggesting. According to a survey, people is such kind of interesting animal that once a thing shows up in their mind for more than 20 times, they will believe that is the truth. So, don’t worry, after 20 times of psychological suggestions, you will not feel any guilt at all because you have considered what you make up as the truth in your mind at that time.

  Completing these preparations in psychology means a half success. Then the next and last step to take is to conduct the lie. When making a lie, you will meet a strong opponent who will give you away. That is not anything else but your own eyes. Anyone who is lying will stare at the upper right unconsciously. So in order to let the audience believe in you and not observe any tact, you have to stare at your upper left whenever you talk. In addition, to further convince them, you need a magic weapon—eye contact. Looking at your receivers’ eyes will give them an impression that you are sincere, honest and reliable, and then it will help you break their psychological obstacles and capture their trust quickly. Then it will be impossible for them to be immune to your influence on their mind and they will believe whatever you say.

  Is the desire to lie burning in your heart now? If it is true, congratulations to you, you have the potential to be a good liar. But I, your teacher, have the duty to remind you that only when the lie can bring benefits to others, can you conduct. Once you lie for hurting others, you will fell into an abyss which is beyond redemption.

  Now, the whole course to make a white lie is drawing to a close. Let me emphasis the points again. Firstly, remove your moral guilt, then apply self-hypnosis, last but not least, stare at the upper left and use eye contact when talking. Keep these in mind when you have to lie and you won’t indefinitely be a good liar.