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love
发布时间:2014-11-27 20:45:32 作者:徐金莹  发布者:jy946165 浏览次数:2465  类别:英文作文  
[大学一年级] 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 芝罘区 >> 世回尧街道


                                    Love in the bottom of my heart

They met for the first time in three years ago, they were assigned to the same class which the head teacher was very strict and responsible. But the miracle is everywhere.

One day the students in the back  were  folding origami crane, including him. The girl was interested in this, also joined in. The girl was attracted by his sense of humor and handsome, smiling and watching him . “Do you like this?” The boy setting in the chair asked. The girl looked at his charming eyes, smiled with saying anything. He Stood up , gave her own fold origami birds. From then on, she is always not consciously looking in his direction , Sometimes met his gaze, two people smiled at one another. Like and novelty were inflation in the two hearts. Finally, brave girl opened the mouth after carefully thought for a few days.“Can you do my boyfriend? I like you from the first time to see you.” And then Waiting for the boy's reply in fear and trembling.The boy replied,“Yes,I do.”The girl was very happy and the heart was like the fawn disorderlyn bump. The day was on January ,23.

The boy was so thoughtful that took care of the girl was very good. He insisted writing “Good night ,sweat dream” on her message board every night , without exception.She calld him “Stupid ass”and he called her “ Pig baby” .They all believe each other will go to the end , Like the words said“I want the future is that the sunshine and you are in”, What a lovely words.

But Time will prove everything. Little by little, they becamed strange sometimes even silence, the quarrel. They are too young to face and bear each other's naive emotions. After a short holiday they had to break up with love. On that day, The girl tightly clasped the boy want to retain him,“Don't go, don't leave me alone” She cried and Begged. The boy looked at his beloved girl, and tears fall down. He loved her, but  don't have the heart to continue to hurt her, had to be cruel,said “Could we still be friends, isn't it?” From then on, they never contacted. Until three years later, Inadvertently saw the news of him on the Internet, Know that he has a new girlfriend, and the girl also had a new boyfriend a year ago. Both look very happy But the inner feelings only  themselves  can experience.

What I want to say is not that Youth love is cheap but If you want to protect the Clean and pure feelings, must have A sense of responsibility for their own feelings, rather than muddle along. Some people some things, wrong is a lifetime, Don't let youth regret.

 

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    Love in the bottom of my heart

    They met for the first time in three years ago, they were assigned to the same class which the head teacher was very strict and responsible. But the miracle is in everywhere.

      One day the students in the back  were  folding origami crane, including him. The girl was interested in this (that and) also joined in. The girl was attracted by his sense of humor and handsome, smiling (smile) and watching him (eye-contact) . “Do you like this?” The boy setting in the chair asked. The girl looked at his charming eyes, then she smiled without saying anything. He Stood up , gave her own (a) folded origami birds. From then on, she is always not unconsciously looking in (at) his direction , Sometimes she met his gaze, two people (both of them) smiled at one another (the same time). Like and novelty were inflation in the two hearts. Finally, brave girl opened the mouth after carefully thought for a few days.“Can (Could) you do (want to be) my boyfriend? I like you from the first time to see you.” And then Waiting (she waited) for the boy's reply in fear and trembling.The boy replied,“Yes,I do.”The girl was very happy and the heart was like the fawn disorderlyn bump. The day was on January ,23.

      The boy was so thoughtful that he took great care of the girl was very good. He insisted writing “Good night ,sweat dream” on her message board every night , without exception.She calld him “Stupid ass”and he called herPig baby” .They all believe each other will go to the end , Like the words said“I want the future is that the sunshine and you are in”, What a lovely words.

      But Time will prove (change) everything. Little by little, they becamed strange sometimes even silence, then they quarreled. They are too young to face and bear each other's naive emotions. After a short holiday they had to break up with love. On that day, The girl tightly clasped the boy want to retain him,“Don't go, don't leave me alone” She cried and Begged. The boy looked at his beloved girl, and tears fall down. He loved her, but  don't have the heart (want) to continue to hurt her (wounding her) had to be cruel,said “Could we still be friends, isn't it?” From then on, they never contacted. Until three years later, Inadvertently the girl saw the news of him on the Internet, Know (She knows) that he has a new girlfriend, and the girl (but she) also had a new boyfriend a year ago. Both of them look very happy But the inner feelings only themselves can experience (understand).

      What I want to say is not that Youth love is cheap but If you want to protect the Clean and pure feelings, and must have A sense of responsibility for their own feelings, rather than muddle along. Some people or some things, wrong (the mistake) is a lifetime, Don't let youth regret.


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