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My teacher
发布时间:2012-10-07 13:21:49 作者:乔士玲 发布者:qiaoshiling 浏览次数:3755 类别:英文作文 优秀指数:★
[小学六年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇安头小学
I have a English teacher .She is young .She is active ,too .She is funny .I like her!
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批改教师:冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
批改时间:2012/10/7 13:59:10
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I have a(an) English teacher .She is young .She is active ,too .She is funny .I like her!
Thank you,shiling.I always love you.
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批改教师:郝文越 ( 山西省 >> 晋中市 >> 平遥县 >> 中都乡 >> 中都乡桥头小学 )
批改时间:2012/10/7 15:08:19
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I have a (an)English teacher .She is young .She is active ,too .She is funny .I like her!
点评:
题目可以改成 我的英语老师 My Englishi teacher.
期待乔世玲同学更精彩的英语习作。
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批改教师:张居正 ( 浙江省 >> 嘉兴市 >> 秀洲区 )
批改时间:2012/10/7 20:23:16
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I have a English teacher .She is young .She is active ,too .She is funny .I like her!
字数太少,也不通顺
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批改教师:王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
批改时间:2012/10/15 15:05:53
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I have a anEnglish teacher .She is young .She is active ,too .She is funny .I like her!
点评:字数有些少,语句有些不大通。可以用些and等关联词语。
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批改教师:李晨超 ( )
批改时间:2012/12/4 22:23:16
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I have a (an)English teacher .She is young .She is active ,too .She is funny .I like her!
I want to know her name .Can you write more about her ?