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To live confidently
发布时间:2014-10-24 20:44:47 作者:许静  发布者:2014207050004 浏览次数:2580  类别:英文作文  
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To live confidently

On seeing this deed, a sentence coming into my mind is that : No one can make you feel inferior without your consent. It fully expresses the importance of self-confidence from my point of view.

Now people in growing numbers are coming to realize that to live confidently has been the order of the day.

It is clear that to live confidently means we need believe in our own abilities and do not make light of ourselves. If we are confident of living, it not only can support us to surmount the difficulties, but also make us have more creativity on absorbing and working. So we can get closer and closer to success. Nonetheless, if we live without confidence, we may not have enough courage to put across our chore so that the success may be far from us.

Self-confident can give us encouragement when we are dismayed that is like light up dark. So we should be confident of confronting everyday and to live confidently as far as I am concerned.

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    To live (Living) confidently

    On seeing this deed, a sentence coming into my mind is that : No one can make you feel inferior without your consent. It fully expresses the importance of self-confidence from my point of view.

    Now people in growing numbers are coming to realize that to live (living) confidently has been the order (tendency) of the day (age).

    It is clear that to live (living) confidently means we need to believe in our own abilities and do not make light of ourselves. If we are confident of living, it not only can support us to surmount the difficulties, but also make us have more creativity on absorbing and working. So we can get closer and closer to success. Nonetheless, if we live without confidence, we may not have enough courage to put across our chore so that the success may be far from us.

    Self-confident can give us encouragement when we are dismayed that is like light up dark. So we should be confident of confronting everyday and to live confidently as far as I am concerned.

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