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Tower of London

发布时间：2014-10-23 11:58:30 作者：蒋介  发布者：13029128362 浏览次数：2586  类别：英文作文  

Have you ever been to the tower of London? I feel very curious about it. I hope I can have a chance to have a look. It is said that it is the symbol of British Royalty and built in 1087. It has been the World Cultural Heritage. It was the palace of ruler. Jame I is the last owner. But it was used for many purposes after no rulers living in it, such as, fort, armory, treasury, observatory, prison and so on. Now it is one of the most popular historical cite in British. The yeoman warders manage it now. There are seven ravens in it as lucky mascot. No one is allowed to come in or go out at night because of the Ancient legend. Every night they will hold the old lock ceremony. How am I not interested in such place?

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  Have you ever been to the tower of London (London Tower)? I feel very curious about it. I hope I can have a chance to have a look. It is said that it is the symbol of British Royalty and ^was built in 1087. It has been (is) the World Cultural Heritage. It was the palace of ruler. Jame I is the last owner. But it was used for many purposes after no rulers living in it such as fort, armory, treasury, observatory, prison and so on. Now it is one of the most popular historical cites in British. The yeoman warders manage it now. There are seven ravens in it as lucky mascot. No one is allowed to come in or go out at night because of the Ancient legend. Every night they will hold the old lock ceremony. How am I not interested in such place?