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change makes life colorful
发布时间:2014-10-21 19:37:32 作者:张桂民  发布者:zgm201314 浏览次数:2196  类别:英文作文  
[大学一年级] 陕西省 >> 咸阳市 >> 杨陵区 >> 杨陵街道


   If we make life as a trip,there is no doubt that we will see so many scenery on the trip.However,if we see the same thing all the way we will get tired,and the trip will became boring.So,what makes the trip interesting and colorful?It's change,only the scenery continually change can we not lost interest in it,different scenery bring us different feeling,and that just like condiment for cooked food,different condiments make cooked food delicious.It's same to life,we need to learn to change,the worst thing for is take things as they are,thouse people will lost innovative,they only do one thing in their life.In my opinion,they are loser,they missed so many things,so,a successful person must a person who can change.Change make them different and their life colorful.
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    If we make (regard) life as a trip,there is no doubt that we will see so many scenery on (during) the trip.However,if we see (enjoy) the same thing (landscape) all the way we will get tired,and the trip will became (become) boring.So,what makes the trip interesting and colorful?It's change,only the scenery continually change can we not lost (lose) interest in it,different scenery bring us different (various)feeling,and that just like condiment for cooked (cooking) food,different condiments make cooked food delicious.It's same to life,we need to learn to change,the worst thing for is take (treating) things (them)as they are (what they looks like originally) thouse people will lost innovative,they only do one thing in their life.In my opinion,they are loser,they missed so many things (pictures) so,a successful person must a person (man) who can change himself.Change makes them different and their life colorful.
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