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发布时间：2014-04-21 09:05:18 作者：张淞珲  发布者：277060901 浏览次数：2960  类别：英文作文  

        Positive stereotype is given to Asians and Asians_Americans  in the United states,patically with regard to cogitive ability and academic achievement .However ,no study has examined whether the positive stereotypes this group receieves could create a halo effect--------extend more generally to other domains.It's also unclear whether in-group biases would serve to depress ratings that Caucasians made of Asians.In this paper,We deveploped three studies.In study 1,we wanted todetermine the degree ti which Caucasians and Asians shared a bias in favor of Asian's mathmatical abilities .In study 2 and 3,we wanted to determine whether this bias would extend to lauguage writing abilities and the assignment of favorable and unfavoeable character traits to each group.Over the couse of three studies,we faound that caucasian university students showed positive Out-geoup bias toward Asian in a variety of domains including those irrelevant to the predominant stereotypes

• 批改教师：陈伟 ( 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 烟台工贸技师学院 )
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          Positive stereotype is given to Asians and Asians_Americans ^{are often stereotyped positively} in the United states, patically ^particularly with regard to cogitive ability and academic achievement . However , no study has examined whether the positive stereotypes this group receieves ^receive could create a halo effect--------extend^ing more generally to other domains .It's also unclear whether in-group biases would serve to depress ratings that Caucasians made of Asians. In this paper,We deveploped three studies. In study 1,we wanted to determine the degree ti ^towhich Caucasians and Asians shared a bias in favor of Asian's mathmatical abilities . In study 2 and 3,we wanted to determine whether this bias would extend to lauguage writing abilities and the assignment of favorable and unfavoeable character traits to each group.Over the couse of three studies,we faound that caucasian university students showed positive Out-geoup bias toward Asian in a variety of domains including those irrelevant to the predominant stereotypes.

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          Positive stereotype is given to Asians and Asians_Americans  in the United states,patically with regard to cogitive ability and academic achievement .However ,no study (research) has examined (demonstrated) whether the positive stereotypes ⁱⁿ this group receieves could create a halo effect---extend more generally to other domains.It's also unclear whether in-group biases would serve to depress ratings that Caucasians made (is a branch) of Asians.In this paper,We deveploped (have had) three studies.In study 1,we wanted to determine the degree ti which (that) Caucasians and Asians shared a bias in favor of Asian's mathmatical abilities .In study 2 and 3,we wanted to determine whether this bias would extend to lauguage writing abilities and the assignment of favorable and unfavoeable character traits to (in) each group.Over (From) the couse of three studies,we faound that caucasian university students showed positive Out-geoup bias toward Asian in a variety of domains including those irrelevant to the predominant stereotypes