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The population problems of China

发布时间：2014-02-19 21:58:45 作者：白钰  发布者：bailongmei 浏览次数：5782  类别：中文作文  

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根据提示，以The population problems of China为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。      1、中国的人口有多少？      2、中国人口过多有什么不利情况？（至少写三个及三个以上不利情况）      3、中国采取了什么人口对策？效果如何？      4、中国人口在今后将怎样？                                                        The population problems of China  Nowadays, the population of China is about 1.3 billion,Over population will bring many adverse effects.Affect  the  economic development of china and the improvement of peoples living standards .The pressure to natural resources ang  ecological resources .At the same time also can bring serious social problems .THe family planning policy.Let china to speed up the aging reduce  the labor force,population structure has been seve rely disruptecl.However, the population problem is serious in China. We still have a long way to go.

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  书面表达。

  根据提示，以The population problems of China为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。 1、中国的人口有多少？ 2、中国人口过多有什么不利情况？（至少写三个及三个以上不利情况） 3、中国采取了什么人口对策？效果如何？ 4、中国人口在今后将怎样？ The population problems of China Nowadays, the population of China is about 1.3 billion,Over (Large) population will bring many adverse effects.Affect  (on) the  economic development of china and the improvement of peoples living standards .The pressure to natural resources ang  ecological resources .At the same time it also can bring serious social problems .THe family planning policy.Let china to speed up the aging reduce  the labor force,(The birth rate is slow down because of the famliy planning in China.) population structure has been seve rely disruptecl.However, the population problem is serious in China. We still have a long way to go. 有些句子没有读懂，今后要多背范文，不要字对字地翻译，要符合英语习惯。