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发布时间：2014-02-19 11:03:25 作者：白钰  发布者：bailongmei 浏览次数：2377  类别：中文作文  

请根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。70词左右。

Beijing	shanghai	Hong Kong	Chengdu	Dalian	xian
雨加雪	阴	晴	雾	多云	雨转晴
-5℃	5~8℃	7~10℃	3~6℃	-3℃	4~7℃

  Here is the weather report for the next 24 hours in China.Beijing will be below zero,it well be drep 5℃,Shanghai will be windy,it well be at 5~8℃,Hong kong will be at the 3~6℃.Dalian will be at 7~10℃,Chenydu will be cloudy,it will be at the 3~6℃,Dalian will be foggy,it will be at the drop 3℃,Xian will be degree , it will be at the 4~7℃.

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  请根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。70词左右。

  Beijing	shanghai	Hong Kong	Chengdu	Dalian	xian
  雨加雪	阴	晴	雾	多云	雨转晴
  -5℃	5~8℃	7~10℃	3~6℃	-3℃	4~7℃

  Here is the weather report for the next 24 hours in China.Beijing will be below zero,it well (will) be drep (drop) 5℃,Shanghai will be windy,it well (will) be at 5~8℃,(from 5℃ to 8 ℃)Hong kong will be at the 3~6℃.(from 3℃ to 8 ℃) Dalian will be at 7~10℃, (from 7℃ to 10℃ )Chenydu will be cloudy,it will be at the 3~6℃,(from 3 ℃ to 6 ℃)Dalian will be foggy,it will be at the drop 3℃,Xian will be degree , it will be at the 4~7℃(from 4 ℃to 7℃)

  well和will不是一回事，不要乱用；表示一段时间或区域用from...to...这个词组。