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发布时间:2014-02-17 15:46:05 作者:白钰  发布者:bailongmei 浏览次数:2530  类别:中文作文  
[初中二年级] 内蒙古自治区 >> 兴安盟 >> 乌兰浩特市 >> 第八中学


请根据下面表格所列交通工具的特点,写一篇70词左右的短文

 


 Means of transportion

 Characteristics

 Plane

 Fast,expensive

 Train

 Fast,carry many people and things

 Ship

 Cheap,slow,carry many people and things

 Bus

 Cheap,good for a short distance journey

    The Means of transportation is very characteristics.The plane is a fast way

but it is much expensive .The train is fast way too, it concarny many people and things.The ship is a cheep way and it is slow,but it can carry many peple and things.The bus is a cheapest way, it's good for a short distance journey.

 


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    请根据下面表格所列交通工具的特点,写一篇70词左右的短文


    Means of transportion

    Characteristics

    Plane

    Fast,expensive

    Train

    Fast,carry many people and things

    Ship

    Cheap,slow,carry many people and things

    Bus

    Cheap,good for a short distance journey

    The Means of transportation is very characteristics.The plane is a fast way

    but it is much (very) expensive .The train is fast way too, it concarny (can carry) many people and things.The ship is a cheep (cheap) way and it is slow,but it can carry many peple and things.The bus is a cheapest way, it's good for a short distance journey.

    much后面加比较级,way表示方式,可以说“乘飞机(火车、轮船等)是一种快捷方式”而不能说“飞机(火车、轮船等)是一种快捷方式”。


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