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P.E.

发布时间：2013-05-21 16:59:07 作者：陈思婉  发布者：872575723 浏览次数：2138  类别：中文作文  

  Everyone on the playground,many classmates playing ball games,and a few classmates sitting on the chair.I like doing sports,so I 'm playing basketball with some classmates.

  A lot of classmates look dowm me,but I never sad,because I know about:believe in myself,never give up,oneself the best forover.The teacher usually say:"Do you love P.E?""Yes!I love it very much.I think,It's good for me.

  This is my dream,I'll remember it forover.

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    Everyone ^was on the playground,many classmates ^were playing ball games,and a few classmates ^were sitting on the chair.I like doing sports,so I 'm playing basketball with some classmates.

    A lot of classmates look^ed dowm me,but I never ^be sad,because I know about believe^ing in myself ^and never give^ing up,oneself(we are) the best forover.The teacher usually say^s:"Do you love P.E?""Yes!I love it very much.I think,It's good for me.

    This is my dream,I'll remember it forover.