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My holiday

发布时间：2013-05-09 18:54:54 作者：王俐  发布者：1394771346 浏览次数：2815  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

   It was a long holiday. We left linyi on May 1st and got to Jinan on the 2nd .On the first day ,I went to a park with my family. On the 3rd ,I went sking with my sisther and my brother. On the 4th, I did my homework.On the 5th,I boughut presents for my uncle. We got back to linyi by piane on the 6th.For the last day of the holiday,we relaxed and prerared to go back to work or school.I was so happy!

• 批改教师：周绍芬 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/23 19:50:41
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     (开头留3个字母的空)It was a long holiday. We left linyi on May 1st and got to(Jinan) jinan on the 2nd .On the first day ,I went to a park with my family. On the 3rd ,I went sking with my sisther and my brother. On the 4th, I did my homework.On the 5th,I boughut presents for my uncle. We got back to linyi by piane on the 6th.For the last day of the holiday,we relaxed and prerared to go back to work or school.I was so happy!

   

  我认为这不仅是个long holiday,更是个有意义的holiday!Good luck!