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friendship

发布时间：2013-05-06 21:24:31 作者：马伟  发布者：p110310369 浏览次数：3120  类别：英文作文  

What does friendship mean? There is no definite answer. An eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily life.

　　Friendship is to our life what salt is to dasher. When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade; when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help. We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, which firmly combined them and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism.

　　Friendship isn't almighty, but no one can live happily without

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/7 12:56:42
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  What does friendship mean? There is no definite answer. An eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily life ^{and an eternal theme in literature}.

  　　Friendship is to our life what salt is to dasher. When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade; when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help. We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, which firmly combined them ^{with each other} and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism.

  　　Friendship isn't almighty, but no one can live happily

  it.

• 批改教师：陈伟 ( 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 烟台工贸技师学院 )
  批改时间：2013/5/9 10:37:46
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  What does friendship mean? There is no definite answer. An eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily life.

  　　Friendship is to our life what salt is to dasher. When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade; when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help. We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, which firmly combined them and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism.

  　　Friendship isn't almighty, but no one can live happily without