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发布时间:2022-12-06 09:46:41 作者:宋永梅  发布者:SSSONG 浏览次数:1117  类别:中文作文  
[大学五年级] 北京市 >> 海淀区 >> 海淀街道


 As is graphically and explicitly portrayed in the illustration, there are lots of things, like kongfu, fo, boiling in the pot. Under scrutiny, we can see that things boiled not only come from China, but also originate from foreign countries. Under the cartoon, the caption reads, "Culture hot-pet is delicious and nutrient."
Simple as the picture seems, it transmits a thought-provoking message that cultural globalization is inevitable and only when we embrace it can our culture become better. However, the reality is something else. In reality, too many countries, like America, take measures to prevent themselves from cultural globalization and declare that there is no better culture than theirs. This is partly due to their afraid that their culture would be destroyed, but also because they want to be cultural emperors who can have influence on other countries. However, this phenomenon is utterly devimental so that if we don't take action, chances are high that human civilization will fall into a decline.

Several measures, to sum up, should be taken to reverse this trend. Countries, like America ,should change their basis and embrace other culture. And we, who always promote cultural globalization, also ought to take more action, which can help culture mixed.

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