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My English Learning Experience
发布时间:2013-01-09 19:48:50 作者:李文静  发布者:liwenjing 浏览次数:19695  类别:中文作文   优秀指数:★★★★★
[大学一年级] 北京市 >> 通州区 >> 永顺镇


Hellomy Chinese name is liwenjing, and my English name is Celia. As a college student, I have been learning English for ten years. Today,I will tell you about my learning experience.

First, I love English and I think “Interest” is the key to study English well. I started learning English when I was nine. Luckily, my English teacher is very well. Her class is interesting. I put a lot of time in learning English, so I get good grades at that time. I’m sure we should be interested in English at the beginning. Second, It’s very important for each English learner to explore learning skills and efficient ways for themselves. As I am in the process of English learning to master a lot of reading skills. such as reading more materials, watching more English films. Finally, I believe everybody who is good at English has a basic method. Before classes, I always preview the lesson by repeating after the tapes and look up the new words in the dictionaries. I think it's very useful to keepthis habit.

I love English, and I will try my best to learn English well.

教师点评:
  • 批改教师:王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
    批改时间:2013/1/9 20:35:06
    点评指数:★★★
    点评内容:

    Hellomy Chinese name is liwenjing, (Li Wenjing,这是中文名字的英式写法,姓和名的首字母大写,姓与名字空开,名字间不空格)and my English name is Celia. As a college student, I have been learning English for ten years. Today,I will tell you about my learning experience.

    First, I love English and I think “Interest” is the key to study English well. I started learning English when I was nine. Luckily, my English teacher is very well. (good,well一般作副词,形容词只用来形容身体健康)Her class is interesting. I put a lot of time in learning English, so I getgot,at that time是一般过去时态的时间状语)good grades at that time. I’m sure we should be interested in English at the beginning. Second, It’s very important for each English learner to explore learning skills and efficient ways for themselves. As I am in the process of English learning to master a lot of reading skills. such as reading more materials, watching more English films. Finally, I believe everybody who is good at English has a basic method. Before classes, I always preview the lesson by repeatingreading)after the tapes and look up the new words in the dictionaries. I think it's very useful to keep this habit.

    I love English, and I will try my best to learn English well.

         语言准确、流畅。

  • 批改教师:李晨超 ( )
    批改时间:2013/2/1 11:40:28
    点评指数:★★
    点评内容:

    Hellomy Chinese name is liwenjing, (Li Wenjing,这是中文名字的英式写法,姓和名的首字母大写,姓与名字空开,名字间不空格)and my English name is Celia. As a college student, I have been learning English for ten years. Today,I will tell you about my learning experience.

    First, I love English and I think “Interest” is the key to study English well. I started learning English when I was nine. Luckily, my English teacher is very well. (good,well一般作副词,形容词只用来形容身体健康)Her class is interesting. I put a lot of time in learning English, so I getgot,at that time是一般过去时态的时间状语)good grades at that time. I’m sure we should be interested in English at the beginning. Second, It’s very important for each English learner to explore learning skills and efficient ways for themselves. As I am in the process of English learning to master a lot of reading skills. such as reading more materials, watching more English films. Finally, I believe everybody who is good at English has a basic method. Before classes, I always preview the lesson by repeatingreading)after the tapes and look up the new words in the dictionaries. I think it's very useful to keep this habit.

    I love English, and I will try my best to learn English well.

     

    点评:很好的学习经验,兴趣确实是最好的老师。最主要的是我们要养成自主学习的好习惯。希望在以后的日子里能阅读到你更多的作品。

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